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©2009 ~kristi-chan
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Just a test to get a feel for panels, speech bubbles, character personalities, etc. Lots of mistakes, but again, just a test.

Still undecided on their names, though "Bobbi" and "Lyndsey" sound good for the girl and "Gil" sounds good for the dude.

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:icononeweirdanimefreak:
whoa.... i'm so used to reading manga in the opposite direction. 0___e.... this kinda freaked me out at first, but i see that your doing it in american fashion. honestly, i don't see too many mistakes. the basic layouts pretty well done. the only thing i really see wrong is your flow, but that could just be because i'm not used to flipped style. ^^;

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:iconkristi-chan:
I don't know whether I'll draw the official comic/manga left to right or right to left, color or grayscale. Since this page is just a test, I drew it the way I was more comfortable with. The major flow issue I see is his toothpick transforming into his wand.

But again, this was just a test.

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:icononeweirdanimefreak:
true. can't wait till your done! i suggest you just go with grayscale. seems like less work and it may be annoying to get the color to work out.

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:iconjaguargal:
Aw, cute <3

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